Long text writing in English [with correction]

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Original sentence, James S. Kim (me)

It is easier to write short sentence in English here in social network. However, it is not easy to write a long sentences. Even in papers, I can write a long sentences and a long essay in Korean but It it really hard to write a long text and a long documents in English. In order to be a good paper, we need to have a time to revise it but the revision is not a simple task. Therefore, the exercise is greatly important and almost essential for people to be a great writer in English as an non native speaker.

Revised Sentences, Stephen Dickson

It is easier to write short sentence in English here in social network. However, it is not easy to write a long sentence, even in papers. I can write a long sentence and a long essay in Korean but it is really hard to write a long text and a long documents in English.


In order to be a good paper we need to have a time to revise, but the revision is not a simple task. Therefore, the exercise is greatly important and almost essential for people to be a great writer in English as an non native speaker.

Exercise with corrections (maybe the same to the revised sentences)


It is easier to write short sentence in English here in social network. However, it is not easy to write a long sentences, even in papers. I can write a long sentences and a long essay in Korean but It is really hard to write a long text and a long documents in English.

In order to write good papers, it is known to have sufficient time to revise, but the revision is not a simple task. Therefore, the exercise is greatly important and almost essential for people to be a great writer in English especially for non native speakers.


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